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The smallest of whispers in his ear:
The slightest smile on his lips,
Glass table
Those who were surprised
It can see for your pleasure.
His rare smiles are only for you.
If you can find.
May against the palm of your hand cool stuff.
Inseparable grow flowers in her hair is braided.
However, in the dark.
Life can survive?
Its purity was laid aside.
His heart was declared invalid.
The sentence can not be sung for centuries
The memories may fade.
Then, a love so alive?